TLDR;
- Your low conversion rate problem in Birmingham isn't about the colour of your buttons; it's almost definately about your offer and who you're talking to.
- Stop thinking about "people in Birmingham" and start thinking about the specific, expensive nightmare your ideal customer in Birmingham is facing. This is your Ideal Customer Profile (ICP).
- You need to rewrite your landing page message using a proven framework like Problem-Agitate-Solve. Your current message probably isn't connecting on an emotional level.
- The "Request a Demo" or "Contact Us" button is likely killing your conversions. You must offer something of immediate value for free to earn their trust and their business.
- This letter includes an interactive calculator to show you exactly how a small lift in conversion rate can slash your cost per lead, plus several diagrams to illustrate these core concepts.
Hi there,
Thanks for reaching out. I've had a look at your situation with the landing page performance for your Birmingham traffic. It's a really common problem, but the solution is rarely where people think it is. Most people start tweaking headlines or button colours, but that's like rearranging deckchairs on the Titanic if the underlying offer is wrong.
I'm happy to give you some initial thoughts and guidance based on my experience running these kinds of campaigns. The truth is, fixing this goes a lot deeper than simple landing page optimisation. You need to fundamentally rethink who you're talking to and what you're offering them. Let's get into it.
The Real Problem Isn't Your Landing Page... It's Your Offer
Right, let's be brutally honest. People aren't converting on your page not because they don't like the design, but because you haven't given them a compelling enough reason to. Your offer isn't hitting the mark. It's not creating urgency, it's not solving a painful enough problem, and it's not making them feel like they'd be an idiot not to take the next step.
Focusing just on "Birmingham" is a trap. It's a geographic location, not a person with a problem. You're sending paid traffic—people you've spent good money on to get their attention—to a page that probably speaks in general terms. And general messages get ignored. I've seen this dozens of times. A client comes to us with a "conversion problem" but what they really have is an "offer problem" or an "audience problem". The landing page is just the place where that failure becomes obvious.
Think of it like this: a bad offer sent to the wrong audience will fail 100% of the time, even on the world's most beautiful landing page. A killer offer that solves a desperate problem for a specific audience can work even on a pretty basic page. We need to fix the foundations first. Your entire strategy flows from getting this right, and everything else is just tinkering at the edges.
(Doesn't solve a real pain)
("People in Birmingham")
(Speaks to no one)
(Your current problem)
We'll need to look at who you're actually talking to...
So, who is your ideal customer? And I don't mean "a business in Birmingham". That tells me absolutely nothing useful. You need to forget sterile demographics for a minute and focus on their nightmare. What is the specific, urgent, expensive, career-threatening problem that keeps them awake at night? Your Ideal Customer Profile (ICP) isn't a job title; it's a problem state.
Let me give you an example from the B2B world. We had a client selling a software development tool. Their old ICP was "tech companies with 50-200 employees." Their ads were generic and their cost per lead was through the roof. We changed their ICP to: "A Head of Engineering who is terrified of her best developers quitting out of sheer frustration with a broken, inefficient workflow."
See the difference? We're not selling a tool anymore. We're selling a way to retain top talent. We're selling peace of mind to that manager. The entire marketing message changes. The ad copy, the landing page, everything. It becomes hyper-relevant and incredibly powerful.
You need to do this for your Birmingham audience. Are you targeting:
- -> A restaurant owner in the Jewellery Quarter whose phone isn't ringing for bookings?
- -> A manufacturing director in Nechells whose production line keeps breaking down, costing him thousands per hour?
- -> A homeowner in Solihull who's just had a boiler emergency in the middle of winter?
Each of these people has a completely different nightmare. A generic "We Offer The Best Services in Birmingham" landing page speaks to none of them. You need to pick one, become an obsessive expert in their specific pain, and tailor your entire landing page to be the one and only solution to that pain. Everything from the headline to the testimonials must scream "I understand your exact problem, and I am the specialist who can fix it."
VAGUE ICP (The Wrong Way)
- Targets "Businesses"
- Located in "Birmingham"
- Needs "Our Service"
- Leads to generic ads
- Results in low relevance
PAIN-BASED ICP (The Right Way)
- Role: Finance Director
- Industry: Manufacturing
- Nightmare: Cash flow is a guess; can't make payroll if a big invoice is late.
- Goal: Predictable financial dashboard.
- Result: Hyper-targeted, high-converting ads.
You probably should rebuild your message from the ground up...
Once you know exactly who you're talking to and what their specific nightmare is, you can write a landing page message they simply can't ignore. Don't start from a blank page. Use a proven copywriting framework. The two I rely on most for service businesses are Problem-Agitate-Solve (PAS) and Before-After-Bridge (BAB).
Problem-Agitate-Solve (PAS)
This is direct and powerful. You hit them with the exact problem they're facing, you twist the knife by describing how much worse it is than they think, and then you present your service as the perfect solution.
Let's imagine you run a commercial cleaning service in Birmingham targeting office managers.
- -> Problem: Is your current cleaning service unreliable? (The office manager instantly relates).
- -> Agitate: Are you tired of coming in on a Monday to find overflowing bins and dirty desks? Is it embarrassing when clients visit? Are your staff complaining about the state of the office, affecting morale and productivity? (Now it's not just about a bit of dust, it's about productivity, reputation, and staff happiness).
- -> Solve: We provide a guaranteed, reliable cleaning service for Birmingham businesses. Our dedicated team uses a 50-point checklist to ensure your office is spotless, every single time. Get a quote in 60 seconds and never worry about your cleaners again. (Clear, direct, and solves the agitated pain).
Before-After-Bridge (BAB)
This framework is great for painting a picture of transformation. You describe their current, painful world (Before), show them the ideal world they want to be in (After), and then position your service as the simple bridge to get them there.
Let's use the same cleaning service example.
- -> Before: Right now, your office is a source of constant stress. You're chasing unreliable cleaners, dealing with staff complaints, and you can't focus on your actual job.
- -> After: Imagine an office that's always pristine. Your team is happy and productive, clients are impressed, and you have complete peace of mind, knowing it's all taken care of without you lifting a finger.
- -> Bridge: Our 'Always Clean' service is the bridge to get you there. With a dedicated account manager and our 50-point checklist, we make achieving that perfect office effortless.
Your landing page needs to be structured around one of these frameworks. The headline should state the Problem or the After state. The body copy should Agitate the pain or describe the Before state. Your call to action section should present the Solve or the Bridge. This transforms your page from a boring brochure into a persuasive sales argument.
I'd say you need to fix your offer...
Now we get to the most common failure point of all. The Call to Action (CTA). I can almost guarantee your landing page has a button that says something like "Contact Us," "Get a Quote," or the absolute worst of them all, "Request a Demo."
These are possibly the most arrogant CTAs ever conceived. They are high-friction and low-value. You're asking a busy person, who doesn't know or trust you yet, to commit their time to a sales process. You are asking them to do work for you. It's no wonder conversion rates are low. You're asking for marriage on the first date.
Your offer's ONLY job is to deliver a moment of undeniable value—an "aha!" moment that makes the prospect sell themselves on your solution. You must give them something valuable for free to earn the right to ask for their money later.
What this "value-first offer" looks like depends on your business:
- -> If you're a SaaS company: It's a free trial, no credit card required. Let them use the product and see the value for themselves.
- -> If you're a marketing agency: It's a free, automated website audit that shows them their top 3 SEO opportunities. Instant, tangible value.
- -> If you're a financial advisor: It's a free "Retirement Readiness" calculator or a short guide on "5 Tax Mistakes Birmingham Business Owners Make."
- -> For us, as a B2B ads consultancy: It's a free 20-minute strategy session where we audit failing ad campaigns. We solve a small, real problem for free to demonstrate our expertise.
You need to bottle your expertise into a tool, a resource, or an initial consultation that provides instant value and requires low commitment. Replace "Get a Quote" with "Get Your Free [Valuable Thing] Now." This one change can have a bigger impact on your conversion rate than any other tweak you make. You're changing the entire dynamic from "please talk to our salesperson" to "here is something valuable for free that will help you." It's a much easier yes for a prospect.
Look at the numbers. A small increase in your conversion rate can have a massive impact on your cost per lead. If you spend £1,000 to get 500 clicks to your page, and your conversion rate is a dismal 1%, you get 5 leads at a cost of £200 each. If you fix your offer and lift that conversion rate to just 4%, you now have 20 leads at £50 each. You've just quartered your lead cost without spending a penny more on ads. This is the maths that matters.
You'll need to understand the numbers...
This brings me to a bigger point. The real question you should be asking isn't "How can I lower my lead cost?" but "How high a lead cost can I afford to acquire a great customer?" The answer is your Customer Lifetime Value (LTV). If you don't know this number, you're flying blind.
It's a simple calculation:
LTV = (Average Revenue Per Customer * Gross Margin %) / Monthly Churn Rate
Let's say you're a subscription-based service business in Birmingham.
- -> Average Revenue Per Customer (monthly): £300
- -> Gross Margin: 70% (0.70)
- -> Monthly Churn (how many customers you lose each month): 5% (0.05)
LTV = (£300 * 0.70) / 0.05
LTV = £210 / 0.05 = £4,200
In this example, each customer is worth £4,200 in gross margin over their lifetime. A healthy ratio of LTV to Customer Acquisition Cost (CAC) is at least 3:1. This means you can afford to spend up to £1,400 to acquire a single customer (£4,200 / 3).
Now, let's say your sales process converts 1 in 5 qualified leads into a paying customer. That means you can afford to pay up to £280 (£1,400 / 5) for a single qualified lead. Suddenly that £50 CPL we calculated earlier doesn't just look good, it looks like an absolute bargain. It means you have a huge amount of room to scale agressively.
This is the maths that unlocks growth. It frees you from the tyranny of chasing cheap, low-quality leads and allows you to focus on acquiring high-value customers, even if the upfront cost per click from a specific Birmingham postcode is higher.
Let's talk about the traffic you're sending...
Finally, once your offer is irresistible, your message is razor-sharp, and your CTA is value-first, we can look at the traffic. Your low conversions might be partly because you're attracting the wrong people in Birmingham in the first place. You need to pre-qualify your audience before they even click the ad.
If you're using Google Ads, this comes down to keyword intent. You need to target keywords that signal someone is ready to buy, not just doing research.
- -> Bad Keyword (Informational): "how to fix a dripping tap"
- -> Good Keyword (Commercial Intent): "emergency plumber birmingham"
- -> Bad Keyword (Broad): "accountants"
- -> Good Keyword (Specific Intent): "small business accountant quote digbeth"
By bidding on high-intent keywords, you ensure the people clicking your ad are already "problem aware" and actively looking for the solution you provide. They arrive at your landing page already pre-qualified, making them far more likely to convert.
If you're using Meta (Facebook/Instagram) ads, you prioitise targeting based on pain points. Instead of broad interests like "Business," target interests in software they use (like Xero or Sage if you're an accountant), publications they read, or competitors they follow. Then, your ad copy must call out their specific problem. This way, only the people who feel that pain will click through, again, ensuring higher quality traffic hits your landing page.
Your landing page is the final, crucial step in a chain. If any of the previous links—the offer, the ICP, the message, the traffic source—are weak, the whole thing breaks. You need to fix the entire system, not just the last piece.
This is the main advice I have for you:
I know this is a lot to take in. It's a fundamental shift from "how do I get more conversions" to "how do I build a system that generates high-value customers." I've detailed my main recommendations for you below as a clear action plan:
| Area of Focus | The Problem | Recommended Action | Why It Matters |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1. Your ICP | You're targeting a location ("Birmingham") instead of a person with a problem. Your message is too generic. | Define your Ideal Customer Profile based on their specific, urgent "nightmare," not their demographics. Get hyper-specific. | This allows you to create a marketing message that is incredibly relevant and persuasive to the right people. |
| 2. Your Message | Your landing page copy likely describes what you do, not the transformation you provide. It fails to connect emotionally. | Rewrite your entire landing page using the Problem-Agitate-Solve or Before-After-Bridge framework. Focus on their pain and your solution. | This turns a boring page into a compelling sales argument that guides the visitor towards conversion. |
| 3. Your Offer (CTA) | Your "Contact Us" or "Get Quote" button is high-friction and low-value. It's a huge barrier to conversion. | Replace it with a "value-first" offer. A free tool, guide, audit, or strategy call that solves a small problem for them instantly. | This builds trust, demonstrates expertise, and dramatically lowers the barrier to entry, which will significantly increase your conversion rate. |
| 4. Your Traffic | You may be attracting low-quality, low-intent clicks, who were never going to convert anyway. | Refine your ad targeting. On Google, focus on high-intent commercial keywords. On Meta, use interest targeting that aligns with their pain point. | Ensures that the people who arrive on your shiny new landing page are already pre-qualified and actively looking for a solution. |
Implementing all of this correctly takes time, expertise, and a lot of testing. It's a process of deep customer research, compelling copywriting, and strategic thinking. It's not just about setting up an ad campaign; it's about building a predictable engine for customer acquisition.
This is where working with a specialist can make a huge difference. We've run this playbook for dozens of clients, from B2B SaaS companies to local service businesses, and we've seen firsthand how getting these foundations right can transform performance. For one client, a medical job matching software platform, we reduced their Cost Per User Acquisition from £100 down to just £7.
If you'd like to have a chat about how we could apply this thinking specifically to your business, we offer a completely free, no-obligation 20-minute strategy session. We can take a look at your current landing page and campaigns together and give you some more tailored, actionable advice. There's no hard sell; it's just a chance for us to show you what we can do.
Hope this helps!
Regards,
Team @ Lukas Holschuh