Hi there,
Thanks for reaching out!
Happy to give you some of my initial thoughts on your Meta ads situation. It's a common question – just how clever are these platforms, really? You've hit on the core problem with most advertising: the difference between looking busy and actually getting results. Your instinct to move away from a 'word salad' ad and get more specific is absolutely the right one. The trick isn't just about whether Meta is 'smart' enough on its own, but about feeding it the right strategy so it can do its job properly. Right now, you're likely paying it to find the wrong people.
Let's unpack this a bit.
TLDR;
- Your 'catch-all' ad with good engagement is a trap. You are likely paying Meta to find people who like and comment, not people who need a mortgage. You must switch your campaign objective to 'Leads' or 'Conversions'.
- Stop targeting by loan product. You need to define your Ideal Customer Profile (ICP) by their specific, urgent problem (e.g., a veteran's frustration with lenders who don't understand the VA process).
- For niche audiences like veterans, you can't just pick an interest. You have to build a 'proxy audience' by layering specific military-related interests on top of general home-buying signals. I've included a flowchart below to show how this works.
- The single biggest reason your ads will fail is your offer. "Apply Now" is a terrible call to action for a cold ad. You need to offer something of genuine value first, like a free PDF guide or a checklist, to build trust and capture a lead.
- This letter includes an interactive calculator to help you estimate your potential Cost Per Lead (CPL) and Return on Ad Spend (ROAS) once you implement a proper strategy.
We'll need to look at why your 'catch-all' ad feels effective (but isn't)...
First off, let's address the "good engagement" on your current ad. I know it feels good to see likes, comments, and shares rack up. It feels like the ad is 'working'. Tbh, this is one of the biggest and most expensive myths in paid advertising. Unless you're a global brand like Coca-Cola, engagement is a vanity metric. It rarely, if ever, translates into qualified leads or closed loans.
Here’s the uncomfortable truth: when you run a campaign and let the algorithm optimise for 'Engagement' or even just 'Reach', you are giving it a very specific, and very unhelpful, command. You're telling it: "Find me the largest number of people, for the cheapest possible price, who are most likely to click the like button."
The algorithm is incredibly good at its job. So it goes out and finds exactly those people. It finds users who are serial 'likers'. People who comment on everything. People whose attention is cheap because they aren't in high demand from other advertisers who are trying to sell something. You are actively paying the world's most powerful advertising machine to find you an audience of non-customers. It’s a vicious cycle. You get lots of engagement, which makes you think the ad is good, so you keep putting money into it, all while your budget is being spent on people who will never, ever apply for a mortgage with you.
Your "word salad" ad gets engagement because it's broad. There's something in there for everyone to latch onto, but it speaks directly to no one. It lacks punch. It's wallpaper. A potential first-time buyer might see it and think "oh, that's interesting" and scroll on. A veteran might see the term 'VA loan' buried in a paragraph and not even register it. Specificity is power. A generic message gets a generic, and ultimately useless, response. The fact you're getting *any* conversations from it is more down to luck and sheer volume than an effective strategy.
I'd say you need to redefine your customer, not by loan type, but by their problem...
This brings me to the most important shift in thinking you need to make. Forget demographics for a moment. Forget "people aged 25-45 in my area". That tells you nothing of value. To stop burning cash, you have to define your customer by their pain. By their specific, urgent, expensive nightmare.
Your Ideal Customer Profile (ICP) isn't a person; it's a problem state.
Let's take your VA loan example. The customer isn't just "a veteran." What is their actual nightmare?
- -> It's the deep-seated frustration of dealing with lenders who say they 'do' VA loans but have no real understanding of the process, the Certificate of Eligibility (COE), or the unique underwriting requirements.
- -> It's the fear of missing out on a hard-earned benefit because of bureaucratic red tape and misinformation.
- -> It's the anxiety of being told "no" by someone who simply doesn't have the specialist knowledge, when the answer should have been "yes."
Now, think about a First-Time Home Buyer who might be a good fit for an FHA loan. What's their nightmare?
- -> It's the overwhelming, soul-crushing belief that they need a 20% down payment, a figure that feels completely unattainable as they watch house prices climb every month.
- -> It's the terror of applying for a loan and being rejected, the feeling of not being 'good enough' to own a home.
- -> It's the confusion of navigating a world of jargon—PMI, DTI, escrow—that feels designed to keep them out.
When you understand their nightmare, your entire approach changes. You stop selling "mortgage products" and you start selling a solution to a painful, urgent problem. You sell clarity. You sell confidence. You sell a good night's sleep. This deep understanding of their specific pain is the foundation for everything that follows: your targeting, your ad copy, and your offer.
You probably should rethink your entire targeting strategy...
So, how do we reach these people on Meta? You're right, you can't just type "people who want a VA loan" into the interests box. The platform isn't a search engine. Unlike Google Ads, where you can catch people with incredible precision the moment they type "VA loan lender near me," Meta is about finding people based on signals and behaviours. We need to build a 'proxy audience' that is highly likely to contain our ideal customer.
This is where layering comes in. You don't use a single, broad interest. You combine several interests to narrow the field and increase the probability that you're reaching the right person. For your VA loan campaign, it would look something like this:
Base Layer (Broad Home Interest):
People who have shown interest in pages or content related to:
- -> Zillow
- -> Realtor.com
- -> Mortgage loan
- -> First-time buyer grant
This is our starting point. It's a massive audience of millions of people who are probably thinking about houses. On its own, it's useless.
AND MUST ALSO MATCH (Narrowing Layer - Veteran Affinity):
We then tell Meta that people in that first group MUST ALSO show interest in pages or content related to:
- -> The US Department of Veterans Affairs
- -> Veterans of Foreign Wars (VFW)
- -> The American Legion
- -> Specific military branch associations (e.g., Marine Corps Association)
By combining these, we are no longer targeting everyone interested in Zillow. We are targeting a much smaller, much more relevant group of people who are interested in Zillow AND have a strong affinity with veteran organisations. Is every single person in this audience a veteran looking for a VA loan? No. But the probability is now dramatically higher. You've gone from firing a shotgun into a forest to using a rifle with a scope. This is how you make Meta 'smart'. You give it a much clearer, more refined target to aim for.
Here's a visual representation of how that audience layering logic works:
Audience 1: Broad Housing Interest
- Interested in: Zillow
- Interested in: Realtor.com
- Interested in: Mortgage Loans
Audience 2: Veteran Affinity
- Interested in: Dept. of Veterans Affairs
- Interested in: VFW
- Interested in: The American Legion
Your Target Audience
- People showing signs of home-buying who ALSO have strong ties to veteran communities.
You would build a separate, distinct campaign for each of your core loan types, each with its own carefully constructed, layered audience. For FHA loans, you might layer interests like 'First-time buyer grant' with demographic data like age and behaviours like 'likely to move'. Each ad set becomes a persistent experiment, and you ruthlessly cut the ones that don't produce qualified leads, while scaling the ones that do.
You'll need a message they can't ignore...
Now that we know who we're talking to and what their nightmare is, we can craft a message that cuts through the noise. We need to stop listing features (e.g., "3.5% down payment minimums, FHA, VA, Conventional...") and start speaking directly to their pain.
The most effective framework for this is Problem-Agitate-Solve (PAS).
1. Problem: State their nightmare back to them in a way that makes them nod their head and say, "That's me."
2. Agitate: Pour a little salt in the wound. Remind them of the frustration, the anxiety, the cost of not solving this problem.
3. Solve: Introduce your service not as a product, but as the clear, simple path out of that nightmare.
Let's write a couple of examples:
Example Ad Copy for your VA Loan Campaign:
Headline: Tired of Lenders Who Don't Get Your VA Benefits?
Body: (P) Don't let confusing paperwork and inexperienced loan officers stand between you and the home you've earned. (A) It's frustrating when you're treated like just another number, especially when your VA loan benefit is on the line. Too many veterans miss out because of bad advice. (S) We are VA loan specialists. We know the process inside and out and make it simple. Click below to get our free '5 VA Loan Myths Busted' guide and see the difference an expert makes.
Example Ad Copy for your FHA / First-Time Buyer Campaign:
Headline: That 20% Down Payment? It's a Myth.
Body: (P) Think you need to save for another 10 years to afford a down payment? (A) Watching house prices in our area climb while you're stuck paying your landlord's mortgage is a gut-wrenching feeling. Don't let the 20% down payment myth kill your dream of owning a home. (S) We help first-time buyers get into their own place with as little as 3.5% down. Click to download our free 'First-Time Home Buyer's Roadmap' and find your path to homeownership.
See the difference? These ads aren't a word salad. They are sharp, empathetic, and focused on a single customer with a single problem. They offer a clear solution and, crucially, a low-risk next step.
And for goodness sake, delete the 'Apply Now' button...
This brings us to the final, and perhaps most common, failure point: the offer. The "Apply Now" or "Get a Quote" button on a cold ad is the equivalent of asking someone to marry you on a first date. It's an incredibly high-friction, low-value Call to Action (CTA). It presumes your prospect, who has never heard of you before, is ready to hand over their most sensitive financial information. It's arrogant, and it kills conversion rates.
Your ad's only job is to earn a micro-commitment. It needs to deliver a moment of undeniable value—an "aha!" moment that makes the prospect sell themselves on taking the *next* step with you. You must solve a small, real problem for free to earn the right to solve the whole thing.
Instead of "Apply Now," you need to offer a high-value Lead Magnet. This is a piece of content or a tool that directly helps solve a small part of their nightmare, and they get it in exchange for their name and email address.
- -> For the VA Loan campaign: "The Ultimate VA Loan Checklist" PDF.
- -> For the FHA campaign: "7 Costly Mistakes First-Time Home Buyers Make" Guide.
- -> For a general audience: A simple, interactive "Which Loan Program Fits You Best?" Quiz.
This approach does several powerful things. First, it generates a lead. You now have their contact information and permission to follow up. Second, it builds trust and positions you as a helpful expert, not a pushy salesperson. Third, it qualifies them. Someone who downloads a VA loan checklist is almost certainly interested in a VA loan. You've filtered out the noise. Your follow-up conversations will be with warmer, more educated, and more qualified prospects.
I remember one campaign we worked on for a home cleaning company. They were struggling to get bookings directly from ads at a reasonable cost. By shifting the offer from a high-commitment "Book Now" to a simple lead magnet—a free cleaning checklist—we were able to generate leads for just £5 each. This built them a huge list of interested homeowners they could then nurture into customers. The principle is exactly the same for you: earn the contact information with a low-risk offer first, then earn the full loan application.
Building this out is how you turn advertising from an expense into a predictable system for generating customers. It takes work, it takes testing, and it takes expertise. But it's the only way to win.
To help you see the potential financial impact of this strategic shift, I've put together a simple calculator. You can adjust the sliders to see how changes in ad spend, conversion rates, and your own closing rate could affect your return on investment.
Total Leads Generated
50
Total Closed Loans
5
Total Revenue
£12,500
Return on Ad Spend (ROAS)
6.25x
This is the main advice I have for you:
To put it all together, here is a summary of the core problems in your current approach and the strategic solutions I'm recommending. This is the blueprint you should be working from.
| Problem | Root Cause | Recommended Action |
|---|---|---|
| Generic 'word salad' ad is underperforming. | A message aimed at everyone resonates with no one. Lack of specificity fails to capture attention or address a real pain point. | Create separate, dedicated campaigns for each core customer persona (e.g., VA, FHA, Refinance). Tailor ad copy to their specific 'nightmare' using the Problem-Agitate-Solve framework. |
| Ad gets 'good engagement' but few quality leads. | Campaign objective is likely set to 'Engagement' or 'Reach', telling Meta to find 'likers', not 'buyers'. Engagement is a vanity metric. | Change the campaign objective to 'Leads'. Install the Meta Pixel and track form submissions on your website as the primary conversion event. Force the algorithm to find people who take action. |
| Worried about wasting money on non-veterans for a VA loan ad. | Relying on a single, broad interest or hoping the algorithm will 'figure it out'. This is inefficient and expensive. | Build a 'proxy audience' by layering interests. Combine broad home-buying signals (e.g., interest in Zillow) with specific veteran-affinity signals (e.g., interest in VFW). |
| Getting low conversion rates from ad clicks to actual leads. | Using a high-friction Call to Action like "Apply Now". This is too big of an ask for a cold audience and creates a massive drop-off. | Develop a low-friction, high-value lead magnet for each campaign (e.g., a PDF checklist or guide). Your CTA should be "Download for Free", not "Apply Now". |
| Uncertain about which platform to use. | Believing one platform can do everything. Different platforms are better for different types of intent. | Use Meta for 'discovery' (finding potential buyers via audience building) and complement it with Google Search Ads to capture high-intent prospects actively searching for "VA loan lenders near me". |
As you can see, a successful advertising strategy is a lot more than just boosting a post. It's a system of interconnected parts: deep customer psychology, methodical audience building, compelling creative, and a frictionless offer. Getting any one of these parts wrong can cause the entire system to fail, which leads to wasted money and immense frustration.
This is where expert help can make a significant difference. We've run countless campaigns for service-based businesses and understand the nuances of building these systems from the ground up. We can help you avoid the costly mistakes of trial and error and build a predictable lead generation engine for your business.
If you'd like to discuss your specific situation in more detail, we offer a free, no-obligation initial strategy session where we can review your goals and outline a potential plan of action. It's a great way to get a second opinion and see if we might be a good fit to help you grow.
Regards,
Team @ Lukas Holschuh